Patience is difficult,
To learn as well as teach,
Learning patience is especially hard for me,
Recently I ordered something and I still must wait a week,
It attracted all my attention,
The longer I must wait the greater the tension,
Will it work like all the reviews mention,
I just can't wait,
I want it now,
It better not be late,
If only somehow,
I could go to the future and have it now,
Too bad there is no such thing,
Down with my spirits it does bring,
Whenever I have to wait this long.
I think you could have incorporated more rhythm into this piece because it didn't have a consistent rhyme pattern but other than that it was good.
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